Sunday, November 17, 2013

I was laying in bed trying to get some sleep and some random sentences kept popping into my head. I put them into my phone but realized I wasn't going to get any sleep until I actually shared them. It's late so I want to know from you guys if this poem makes sense. I cannot decide myself and I am not one to normally write poems. Once you read it, please let me know how you interpreted it and if it makes sense. Comments are greatly appreciated! The poem is called My Weakness

My Weakness

Those pretty blue eyes...that is my weakness.
When they well up with tears...that is my weakness.
The constant fight to keep me around...that is my weakness.
Your comments, although it may be flattery...that is my weakness.
The way you hold me tight and tell me everything is going to be okay...that is my weakness.
Your optimism that sinks its way into me...that is my weakness.
The way you make me feel...that is my weakness.
The reason I get up everyday...that is my weakness.

You're the strength when I'm weak.
You're the light when it's dark.
You're the hope when it's lost.
You're the love when I feel alone.
You're the bravery when I'm scared.
You're the fighter when I'm giving up.
You are my strength...but does that also make you my weakness?

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